some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sum of money that are out of proportion to the importance of work that they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement and what's your opinion.

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film

actors or company bosses are

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some

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opponents

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nurses,

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doctors

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, and

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the teacher

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teacher

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teachers

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are

under paid

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underpaid

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so these occupies should earn more salary.

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, I

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with

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statement and my reasons will be elaborated

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this

essay.

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with, it is understandable that

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industry would spend more money

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building

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phenomenon

show for audiences. Take

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adventure movie,

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; TV or movie plays a

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crucial

role in our

life

for leisure time and

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entertainment

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stress or

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anxiety

whether is in

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life

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life

.

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unavoidable

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these

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used a huge proportion of money and sometimes I personally think it is not all

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essential

.

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necessary career like nurses, doctors, and teachers are the key fundamantion

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races

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as a whole.

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people dedicates their personal time to

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others in society, in terms of

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health or

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health problem. In order to serve

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potential skill, it took them to study 4-7 years to be

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professional

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.

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, as a

teacher

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need

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to take a lot of special skill to build a correct

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foundation

of knowledge for

student

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the student

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.

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the tuitor

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tuitor

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tutor

tuition

might need more

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to control students

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behavior

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and attend

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classes.

Therefore

, I personally support

this

statement to be more considered in terms of money paid. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that those industries play a significant role in our daily

life

. I

am strongly disagree

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letter

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statement

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stating

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that the

formor

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former

one should earn more wages.