A large company in your area has 7 band decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir,
I am Harvey, leaving at flat 1, 539, Forest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regards sponsorship by your company
Maxtrade
towards the children
's sports and concert.
First of all, I am really in favour that the Maxtrade
company making a decision to spend around pound 2000 on children
in my area by providing sports facilities.The academy which is set up by Maxtrade
provides regular training and boosts the morale of local children
and they are able to participate at a higher level and benefit children
to fulfil their dreams.
Moreover
,Maxtrade
will also
pay for the two open-air music concerts which will be held up in the upcoming two years. These concerts not only develop the interest of local people of all ages but also
give them a chance to show their talent. Also
, indirect income for the local council.
Finally
, according to
my perception, the company will have to provide personal sports kits to all the players and provide professionally trained coaches so that children
participate without thinking about expenses.Also
provide branded musical instruments and arrange medals for all the participants to boost their confidence
I hope my suggestion would help you to decide what is best for Add a comma
,Also
Maxtrade
.
Yours Sincerely,
HarveySubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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