The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These diagrams explain the way in which
cement
is made from limestone and clay and later concrete is produced from Use synonyms
cement
and other materials for Use synonyms
building
industry. Correct article usage
the building
Overall
, Linking Words
cement
production Use synonyms
inolves
at least 5 different processes, beginning with the crushing Correct your spelling
involves
initial
resources and culminating in the packing into the bags.
Change preposition
of initial
To begin
, limestone and clay Linking Words
place
in the crusher and Add a missing verb
are place
after
Linking Words
this
stage they transform into tiny pieces, which Linking Words
is
called powder. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Secondly
, the powder is going throughout the rotating heater. In the subsequent stages, Linking Words
substance
is crushed again using Add an article
the substance
a substance
grinder
for Add an article
the grinder
a grinder
this
aim. Linking Words
After
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
cement
become ready for different purposes. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
material
is packed into Add an article
the material
the
bags.
One of the practical use of Correct article usage
apply
cement
Use synonyms
is
concrete production, where Correct your spelling
in
cement
accounts for 15% of all ingredients. Use synonyms
Moreover
concrete consists of Linking Words
the
10 Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of water,Replace the word
percent
the
quarter of sand and Correct article usage
a
the
half Correct article usage
apply
of
gravel. When all pieces are placed in Change preposition
apply
concrete
mixer, Correct article usage
a concrete
this
Linking Words
devices
Fix the agreement mistake
device
rotates
and mixed up all materials into ready concrete.Change the verb form
rotate
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