The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.
The diagrams give information on the renovation of a town name, Bridgetown in the year 1700 and 2000. A period of 300 years.
Overall
, there have many changes between 1700 and 2000 like schools, marketplace and bridges.
In the first photo, it can seem that there had a castle near to marketplace and there had only one bridge.In addition
, in the first ,diagrams there had many land farms and no railway in the year 1700.
On the other hand
, the town was very developed in 2000 as can be seen in the second diagram. Because there had many things was changed like new school for children and bigger marketplace in the Bridgetown. Moreover
, there had railways and two bridges in the town. The river is not a thing that changed.
From 1700 and 2000, a
city Correct article usage
the
was very develop
and grow Change the verb form
was very developed
was very developing
up to
Change preposition
into
the
big city.Correct article usage
a
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