The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The graphic shows the

employment

trends and predicts the future based on the past

years

.

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all

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we can see that the services had a big rise over the

years

,

on the

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the

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agriculture

went down gradually. And

lastly

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the manufacturing had a sharp up and a sharp down. Starting with

agriculture

, in 1975

wher

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where

80

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million

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of

employment

, the number stayed steady until 1977 when it decreased

little

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more than 40

millions

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. From 1979 to 1980 it kept slightly going down. The predictions say that

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agriculture

will keep falling in the next few

years

.

On the other hand

, the services remain steady for the first four

years

, but after

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the line climbs rapidly, to a top prediction of 90 million

employees

.

The manufacturing

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employment

stayed constant for the first two

years

, after that it started to increase slowly, until 1979 when it had a significant rise to 50 million

employees

in 1980, but the rise quickly had the same impact dropping. The drop is predicted to

last

until 2025. In conclusion, the

employment

lines in the USA are very variable depending on the job. But concretely the predictions for 2025

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an approximate of 10 million

employees

in manufacturing and

agriculture

, and 90

employees

in services.