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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts give information about
men
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 and
women
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 involved in home tasks like cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house and how much
time
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 each gender spends on these tasks per day, respectively.
Overall
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, a higher percentage of
women
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 are involved in household chores.
While
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 it can be noted that a lesser proportion of
men
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 do housework, it is
also
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 evident that they usually take a little lesser
time
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 in completing most of the tasks than
women
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. Over 60%
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men
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of men
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 engage in cooking
whereas
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 80% of
females
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 tend to cook.
Although
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 20% more
females
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 tend to perform cleaning, the number of males engaging in pet care is slightly higher than
females
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.
In addition
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, almost 20% of
men
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 do house repairs as compared to
women
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 with less than a tenth in number.
Moreover
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,
while
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men
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 take an hour or less to complete cooking and cleaning,
females
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 statistically take 10 to 20 minutes longer to do the same.
Although
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 both of them take a similar amount of
time
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 in pet care which is exactly 20 minutes,
men
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 take double the
time
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 to do house repairs than
women
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time, females with synonyms.
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