The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
diagram depicts how rainfall is combined and then
treated to be drinkable in an Australian town. It is clear from the graph that purifying the water
undergoes five stages to procedure success.
According to
what is shown, the rainwater after falling above the houses, water
goes into drains following
this
step the water
gets in the filter after
that it is collected in huge storage.
Correct word choice
and after
Moreover
,subsequently
the collected Add a comma
,subsequently
water
goes into the water
treatment process which also
has chemical substances. Finally
, this
treated water
is used in houses as a drinkable then
the processing will be cycling .
To sum up
, we could say that rainwater undergoes five phases, starting with the filtration of impurities and finishing with a treatment machine.Submitted by jqanber4 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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