The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
Pie charts depict the data of the
water
utilization for 3 purposes, mainly industrial, agricultural and domestic use
in 6 different areas
,
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that,
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water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes in exactly all the regions while
industrial use
comes second in terms of consumption in most regions,
Glancing at these pie charts reveals that, Africa, Central Asia
as well as
south East Asia
use
a considerable amount of water
for agricultural purposes with roughly 85 % or slightly above, besides
South America which uses exactly 71% for the same purpose as previously stated regions, while
both areas
of Europe and North America utilizes around 35% of water
for agriculture, however
, industrial use
is higher in these same areas
with roughly 48% or slightly above, in the meanwhile the domestic use
also
represents the highest rate in these previously stated areas
nearly a half 48%, whereas
the domestic as well as
industrial use
is the tiniest fraction in the 3 areas
of , Africa, central Asia
and south East Asia
with almost 12%or less,Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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