The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.

The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
Pie charts depict the data of the
water
utilization for 3 purposes, mainly industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
in 6 different
areas
,
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
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water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes in exactly all the regions
while
industrial
use
comes second in terms of consumption in most regions, Glancing at these pie charts reveals that, Africa, Central
Asia
as well as
south East
Asia
use
a considerable amount of
water
for agricultural purposes with roughly 85 % or slightly above,
besides
South America which uses exactly 71% for the same purpose as previously stated regions,
while
both
areas
of Europe and North America utilizes around 35% of
water
for agriculture,
however
, industrial
use
is higher in these same
areas
with roughly 48% or slightly above, in the meanwhile the domestic
use
also
represents the highest rate in these previously stated
areas
nearly a half 48%,
whereas
the domestic
as well as
industrial
use
is the tiniest fraction in the 3
areas
of , Africa, central
Asia
and south East
Asia
with almost 12%or less,
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