The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
Pie charts depict the data of the
water
utilization for 3 purposes, mainly industrial, agricultural and domestic Use synonyms
use
in 6 different Use synonyms
areas
,
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen thatLinking Words
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water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes in exactly all the regions Use synonyms
while
industrial Linking Words
use
comes second in terms of consumption in most regions,
Glancing at these pie charts reveals that, Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
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as well as
south East Linking Words
Asia
Use synonyms
use
a considerable amount of Use synonyms
water
for agricultural purposes with roughly 85 % or slightly above, Use synonyms
besides
South America which uses exactly 71% for the same purpose as previously stated regions, Linking Words
while
both Linking Words
areas
of Europe and North America utilizes around 35% of Use synonyms
water
for agriculture, Use synonyms
however
, industrial Linking Words
use
is higher in these same Use synonyms
areas
with roughly 48% or slightly above, in the meanwhile the domestic Use synonyms
use
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also
represents the highest rate in these previously stated Linking Words
areas
nearly a half 48%, Use synonyms
whereas
the domestic Linking Words
as well as
industrial Linking Words
use
is the tiniest fraction in the 3 Use synonyms
areas
of , Africa, central Use synonyms
Asia
and south East Use synonyms
Asia
with almost 12%or less,Use synonyms
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