The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.

The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
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Pie charts depict the data of the
water
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utilization for 3 purposes, mainly industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
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in 6 different
areas
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,
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, it can be clearly seen that
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water
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is mostly used for agricultural purposes in exactly all the regions
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industrial
use
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comes second in terms of consumption in most regions, Glancing at these pie charts reveals that, Africa, Central
Asia
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as well as
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south East
Asia
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use
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a considerable amount of
water
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for agricultural purposes with roughly 85 % or slightly above,
besides
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South America which uses exactly 71% for the same purpose as previously stated regions,
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both
areas
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of Europe and North America utilizes around 35% of
water
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for agriculture,
however
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, industrial
use
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is higher in these same
areas
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with roughly 48% or slightly above, in the meanwhile the domestic
use
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represents the highest rate in these previously stated
areas
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nearly a half 48%,
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the domestic
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industrial
use
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is the tiniest fraction in the 3
areas
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of , Africa, central
Asia
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and south East
Asia
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with almost 12%or less,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, areas, asia with synonyms.
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