The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future
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The graph shows patterns in the job area in the USA in millions and future guesses. The graph shows
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USA
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the USA
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occupations' developments and
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from 1975 to 2025. When seen as a whole,
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agricultural jobs began as the most prevalent, they ended up being among the lowest after losing out
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services and going down. In the beginning, it seems certain that offices and manufacturing began at almost the same prominence, and they both advanced rapidly until 1980
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when there was a startling turn of events and fabrication abruptly lost its dominance and shrank. By 2025, it is anticipated that the other category would have grown gradually to include 90 million employers. The findings show that farming was the most popular activity because it employed almost as many people as
administration
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.
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did not continue long as it entered a serious decline
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spiral in 1977 and ended up with 80% fewer members.
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