The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts show the adults who spent time on different
activities
in 1958 and 2008. Such
as Sleeping, travelling, working, going out, and other activities
.
The percentage of working, relaxing at home and travelling to work rise compared to 1958 furthermore
the fraction of other activities
, sleeping and going out with family and friends dropped the way adult spend their time.
In 1958 the highest number of senior persons spending their time working hence
in 2008 also
increased from 33% to 42%. Other activities
remain still same at 6% in 1958 as well as
in 2008. However
, the percentage of sleeping diminished from 32% to 25% in 2008. Moreover
, going out with family or friends fraction in 1958 was 19% and decreased to 6% in 2008. Travelling to work was 2% and it rise by 4% compared with 1958. They started to relax at home more, which resulted in 5
% growth contrasted that in 1958.Correct article usage
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