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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates the demand and supply of petrol in
China
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 between 1982 and 2006 respectively.
Overall
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, the daily
production
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 and consumption displayed an upward trend, in which the domestic demand for
oil
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 underwent a more drastic surge and surpassed the national capacity of
production
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 at some point. In
China
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, petrol
production
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 underwent a leap between 1982 and 1986 from 2
million
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 to 3
million
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 barrels per day,
while
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 domestic consumption remained at 2
million
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 barrels. The situation reversed in 1990 when the demand for
oil
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 in the country experienced a surge in 4 years to 3.5
million
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 per day, in 1998, and surpassed the national
production
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. Despite the figure for daily
oil
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production
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 in
China
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 increasing by 0.5
million
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 in 12 years since 1994, the need for
oil
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 in the country displayed a more dramatic growth during the surveyed period and reached 6.5
million
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 barrels per day in 2006, which was two times higher than the amount produced in
China
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, production, oil, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "displayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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