Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organized bye by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with Group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter- say why you want to go on the trip Describe what you could do to help during the trip Ask for more details about the trip Begin your letter as follows: Dear .... You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am very excited for my son James who is a part of the
trip
you have planned to the
Nature
Reserve
this
Sunday. Not only it’s a wonderful idea to keep the kids busy during vacations, but a good way to connect with
nature
. I came to know that you are looking for parents who can accompany the group on
this
trip
. I would like to go and offer my help. Recently, I have taken some time off from my work in order to spend time with family.
Also
, it will be good for me to take a pause and connect with
nature
in
this
fast-pacing day-to-day routine.
Apart from
this
, I think I can
also
help a lot with different things during the
trip
. I have visited the
nature
reserve a couple of times before. So, I can
also
provide information about the different birds we will get to see there. I can
also
help supervise the children during the tour of the
nature
reserve.
However
, I would like to know a few details about the
trip
and its timings. Could you please let me know at what time will the bus depart from the school?
Also
,
while
returning will the busses drop the children at home, or will they come back to the school? I hope you will consider my request. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Shweta
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