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Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

#manager #position #job #company
Dearn
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 Sir or Madam Hello. I am writing
the
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this
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 letter to apply
your
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to your
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 company
as
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for
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 an international position. Here are some reasons why I want to do it. At
frist
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first
, I am
confidint
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confident
 about communication with
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the forigner
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forigner
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foreigner
foreigners
. I studied in America for two years to learn English. I am fluent speak it.
Moreover
, I have been
being
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interested in
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the internetional
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internetional
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international
 part
from
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since
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 I started work. As you can see in my resume, I am in
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the chaging
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chaging
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changing
 import and export part in my current company. I think
this
 experience can be helpful to do
works
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 in your company.
Beside
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 my ability
of working
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, I am
passinate
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passionate
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about
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 my work and have good relationships with co-workers.
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, I am responsible and reliable. I am prepared to work and do my best. I hope to hear
positive
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 response from you. Thank you. Your
sincerly
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sincerely
 Hera
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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