Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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, as the old saying goes: everything has good and bad aspects, they are closely related.Submitted by asqar4997 on
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