Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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on we can not imagine our life without

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would mean that humans are using

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device

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in communications , medicine and transport systems .

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some people would no doubt disagree

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because in their opinion , it has made some dangerous

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which reliance on computer

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. But , in my view ,

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technology

assists us

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resolving

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misunderstandings

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are twofold .

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, it is vitally

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that our work will be easier

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using

technical

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device

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.

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, teachers utilize some types of

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,

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as TV or computer for teaching better . In some

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opinion , pupils learn

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better

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watching .

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, a lot of hospitals

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medical

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. They make more

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people's sickness .

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technologies do not sometimes find illness true .

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, it may be finished with death .

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and more importantly , though , utilizing

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isn't sometimes good , it is developing now . Because a lot

humans

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used to use

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and

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believe that it is not dangerous .

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is part of their life .

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, there are a few occupations related to technique and all of them

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, programmers program our equipment to perform a specific task.

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, we can use them . By way

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conclusion , I believe that using

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is not dangerous .

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why I agree

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opinion that utilizing technique is essential in our life .

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, as the old saying goes: everything has good and bad aspects, they are closely related.