Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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on we can not imagine our life without
technology
.
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would mean that humans are using
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device
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in communications , medicine and transport systems .
Although
some people would no doubt disagree
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because in their opinion , it has made some dangerous
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which reliance on computer
technology
. But , in my view ,
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technology
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resolving
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misunderstandings
. The reasons for
this
are twofold .
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, it is vitally
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important
that our work will be easier
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using
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device
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.
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school
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, teachers utilize some types of
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,
such
as TV or computer for teaching better . In some
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opinion , pupils learn
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better
while
watching .
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, a lot of hospitals
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medical
technology
. They make more
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people's sickness .
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technologies do not sometimes find illness true .
As a result
, it may be finished with death .
Secondly
and more importantly , though , utilizing
technology
isn't sometimes good , it is developing now . Because a lot
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used to use
technology
and
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believe that it is not dangerous .
Technology
is part of their life .
Moreover
, there are a few occupations related to technique and all of them
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useful
now .
For instance
, programmers program our equipment to perform a specific task.
As a result
, we can use them . By way
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conclusion , I believe that using
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is not dangerous .
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opinion that utilizing technique is essential in our life .
Nevertheless
, as the old saying goes: everything has good and bad aspects, they are closely related.
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  • reliance
  • cybersecurity
  • over-reliance
  • digital divide
  • data breach
  • cyberbullying
  • diagnostic machines
  • electronic health records
  • automated vehicles
  • predictive maintenance
  • real-time monitoring
  • vulnerability
  • misinformation
  • hacking
  • efficiency
  • navigation systems
  • traditional skills
  • system failures
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