The process diagram illustrates that in Australian town in what way rainwater is assembled in order to use as potable water.

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, it is obvious that rainwater is collected from all

house

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by the gutter afterwards it is passing all processes which make rainwater turn

to

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into

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drinkable

water

.

This

recycle

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process

is consist

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consists

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of several essential stages (

water

filter, storage,

water

treatment and chemicals).

The first

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of all rain which

fall

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falls

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on the rooftop and

then

rainwater which comes through

drain

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the drain

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is filtered and it

go

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on by tube to store in a

water

tank. continue by pipe in order to treat

water

where all

water

is

remove

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removed

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its

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from its

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impurities. In

this

stage

water

is

recycle

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recycled

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to drink

water

and

then

the

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top of the

water

tank

it

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apply

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is

turn

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turned

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to drink

water

with chemicals. From

this

point, when the

water

is already

is

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ready to use it is

go

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up by helping with

underground

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an underground

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tube to each house where people can use

water

in their daily life.