The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart indicates how UK citizens of different ages spend money on Food and drinks, Restaurants and Hotels, and
Entertainment
in 2004.
In general, the expenses of UK residents for necessities such
as Food and Drink depend on the age group. For example
, people under 30 spend less in this
category than the other three age groups given in the graph. For example
, in 2004 the spending on Food and Drink for people under 30 and between 31-45 years was about 6% and 13% of the total spending respectively.
Furthermore
, Entertainment
obtained more importance for UK citizens who are 46-60 and 61-75 years old, as their expenditures for attractions were about 14% and 23% respectively. Moreover
, the chart shows that the amount of money spent on entertainment
activities rose significantly as people become older. However
, citizens who are 76+ old cut their spending for this
category and use about 13% of the budget for entertainment
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