You have recently bought some furniture. It was broken when you received it. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say – What and when did you buy? – Why was it broken? – Suggest how the problem could be solved

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice an item that I purchased from your shop.I ordered a coffee
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which I liked very much and wanted to get my hands on it when I saw it in your store. The order was placed 2 weeks back with order no-5876432 and was expected to be delivered on the 26th of
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month.The
table
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which I ordered was white in colour and measured around 15cm*12cm. When the delivery arrived I was very excited to open it and place it in my living area.Unfortunately,to my notice when I unboxed the package I noticed that one of the legs of the
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is broken and the surface
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contained some scratches.I felt very disappointed.I believe the damage must have been caused during the shipping as you did not mention the item is fragile and did not instruct the delivery agent to handle it with care. As your policy states any items lost or damaged can be replaced or you can ask for a refund.I ,kindly request you to send someone and replace me with a new
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at the earliest.To avoid
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issues in future I suggest you ship
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delicate items with utmost care and label them to avoid damage. I hope you will consider my suggestions and replace me with a new item. Thanking you. Yours Sincerely, Nida.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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