The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The flow chart illustrates the steps involved in manufacturing
of
leather Change preposition
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product
from animal skin. There are altogether ten steps involved till the final finished item is produced.
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products
Initially
, the animal skin is hung in ropes for drying. Linking Words
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is followed by transportation in trucks to a factory. Linking Words
After
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, they are washed in a solution of water and lime. Later they are soaked in lime. Linking Words
Consequently
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is sent for flattening with the help of big rollers. In the next Linking Words
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they are soaked in tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Leather is Add a comma
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then
polished by small rollers before being transported to factories. Items here are converted into final finished goods.Linking Words
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