You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I Naga Swetha, have been maintaining a

credit

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card

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in your bank for the

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three years, the

card

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number is 5247 9818 0007 0954 and recently upgraded to a Coral

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card

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. I received a

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card

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statement

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for the month of January 2023.

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, I would like to raise a few concerns regarding

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month's bank

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. In the

statement

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, there are a few expensive items purchased by using my

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card

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Namely, a 65 inches Samsung LED TV and Haier 250 litres Refrigerator. Each of the

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price is Rs.45000 and Rs.20000. I did not buy any items since, December 2021, and

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I have not received any alerts on my mobile. After, seeing the

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I cross-verified it with my online banking

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portal. I have checked my available balance on the

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and it shows the correct amount as I have previously. Kindly verify from your side, whether the

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is correct or mistakenly sent to me. Let me know, if you require any

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details. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Naga Swetha.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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