The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage rate of the United Kingdom’s young population
according to
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their
age
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group in the
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1990 and 2001.
Overall
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, as observed the higher population in the 1990s belongs to the
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groups
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0-4 and 15-19 and followed by the
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groups
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5-9 and 10-14. A notable significant shift can be seen in the young teen group in the
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1992,1997, and 2000, which superseded three
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groups
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. Those 0 - 4 categories gained more than 26% in 1990, which was the highest percentage at the beginning; the figure went downwards until 1993 and remain plateaued for two
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, rising slowly and ending with exactly 25% by 2001. Closely followed by the 15-19 category at under 26% and shows a small increase of about half per cent in 1992.
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, it steadily plummeted to the lowest point by 2001 (just below 24.5%). Trailing behind aged 5-9 at roughly 24.5% at the start,
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number considerably climbed until 1997 (just above 26%) and slowly decrease in the following
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by an estimated 1% (2001). Far behind aged 10-14 at just above 23%, which was the lowest. Albeit, a sizable continuous increase noted and surpassed the three
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groups
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throughout the
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ending at approximately below 27%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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