Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: what are the changes what are the problems you are facing what part of the service would you like to change You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam
This
is to bring your attention to the lack of service on the 911 bus route in Rome .I have been using your good transportation service for the
last
two years . Generally weekdays between 07.00 am to 8.30 am every 15 minutes bus reach the De-Bosis bus holt but unfortunately there were some problems in the above time slot for the
last
two weeks.The first issue is the
buses
are delayed some days by more than 20 minutes and its course to late report to my office . Another inconvenient thing is the number of
buses
were
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not sufficient during peak times and all
buses
were fully loaded when they arrive at our place. Many days I had to use the Taxi to report to my office but it was too costly and it is very difficult to manage my salary . I suggest some ideas for improving our transportation service as your regular customer .first you have to make a suitable timetable for office workers between 7.am to 8.30 am .Another suggesting point is the increased number of
buses
during the above time slot . I hope you can understand the above situation because it is more inconvenient for the passengers and
also
I trust your good management will consider the above matter at the earliest opportunity . Highly appreciate your positive reply with solutions in the next few days . Yours faithfully Nandika
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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