Task-1  The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Task-1 

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
report will describe a pie chart showing the production of electricity comparison between all types of
sources
and renewables in
Germany
and
France
in 2009.
Overall
,
Germany
's electricity generation in 2009 is higher than
France
's.
Germany
produces most of their
energy
from conventional thermal
sources
nearly 60 per
cent
,
on the other hand
,
France
generates their
energy
from nuclear power 76 per
cent
. Both two countries' renewable
energy
sources
rate between de 10-20 per
cent
.
Germany
has
also
nuclear power plants and they produce
energy
from there 23 per
cent
.
France
's conventional thermal
energy
rate is about 10 per
cent
. If we look at the renewable
energy
types of these two countries, the pie chart have illustrate us
Germany
has a lot of variety in these
sources
. Biomass and wind
energy
rates are very close to each other. But in ,
France
there is one
source
that is
eye-catching. The rate of hydroelectric
energy
production in
France
is occupied by
this
source
.
To conclude
, the pie chart about the
energy
generated in
Germany
and
France
from all
sources
in 2009 shows us the primary
energy
source
of
Germany
is conventional thermal
energy
. When we look at the percentages of production of
energy
from
France
we can see that nuclear
energy
is the first
source
which
France
generates.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, germany, france, energy, cent, source with synonyms.
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