The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The given bar chart illustrates the quantity of paid and unpaid workers involved in 4 sports roles namely: coaching, referees, therapists and other sections in a town in Australia in 2015.
In general, the number of coaching volunteers was the highest
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. Meanwhile, there were not many changes in the quantity of paid workers among the 4 roles.
Looking at the chart for more detail, more than 70 Use synonyms
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were unpaid to work in coaching, which was the highest number of individuals, followed by other sections with nearly 60 Use synonyms
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for therapists volunteers was around 45 Use synonyms
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those for referees were lower (about 30 Linking Words
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sports sector, Linking Words
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the quantity of paid workers who became coachers halved Linking Words
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