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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts illustrate how much
water
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 is consumed for different reasons in six areas of the world in
percentage
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 terms. Taking a closer look at the charts, one can see that North
America
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 and Europe used
water
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 for industrial use the most, making up 48% and 53%, respectively.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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 of
water
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 usage in the agricultural
field
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 in both continents accounted for the second highest
percentage
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, at 39% in North
America
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 and 32% in Europe.
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, the domestic
field
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 experienced similar percentages of
water
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 usage, with 13% in North
America
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 and 15% in Europe.
In contrast
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, the other areas - South
America
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, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia - showed over 70% in the figure for
water
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 used for agricultural use.
However
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,
while
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 the
percentage
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 of
water
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 consumption in the industrial
field
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(12%) was higher than that in the domestic
field
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(7%), the other three areas had the opposite trend.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the percentages of
water
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 usage for three different purposes were not contributed evenly over the whole world mentioned above.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, percentage, america, field with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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