You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the
sales
of four main types of digital games
during the period from 2000 to 2006 around the world.
The most significant change is that mobile games
passed online games
in 2005; however
, online games
suddenly surged from roughly 5 to 10, in 2005 and 2006 respectively. It is also
interesting to note that online games
had 0 billion sales
globally in 2000, while
it now has the second greatest
share of the digital Add a hyphen
second-greatest
games
market.
Another notable trend is console games
, It
started with the second most Correct pronoun usage
They
sales
(6 billion) in 2000, while
they gain a downward trend during the period from 2000(6billions) to 2006(3 billion). In contrast
, handheld games
had a stable increase throughout the period.
Overall
, handheld games
remains its dominant market position since 2000, and online games
and mobile phone games
are now second and third place in the market. The least sales
are console games
, and it is still declining every year.Submitted by aslenxd on
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