The table below show the production of milk annually in four country in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below show the production of milk annually in four country in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below show the production of milk annually in four country in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the features and make comparison where relevant.
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the
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of
milk
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produced yearly among 4 countries in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the Netherlands, 11,262,000
litres
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of
milk
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were produced in 1990. 11155,000
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produced in 2000. With 11466,000
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in the
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2010. In ,Australia
milk
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production is as follows, 11246,000 in 1990, and 11105,000
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in the
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2000. Having a total of 9165,000
litres
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in the
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2010.
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in ,Tanzania
milk
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is produced in which they have the following analysis , 87000
litres
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in 1990. 142000
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in the
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2000.
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155000
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in 2010.
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Guatemala they have 26000
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of
milk
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produced in the
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1990,
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in the
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2000 55000
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milk
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were made with a total of 84000 in the
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2010. Conclusively, based on the analysis the Netherlands and Australia have the highest
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made
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Guatemala have the least
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produced among them yearly. Task 2 In the recent era that we are now most
parents
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take it as their duty to dictate what activities to be carried out by their pupils in their leisure
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with some other
parents
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saying children should be allowed to choose the kind of play they want to participate in at their own leisure
time
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.
Parents
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dictating will make the child lose a sense of belonging
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allowing the children to do what they
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want
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their own pace makes them
be
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dependent right from childhood.
this
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will be expatriate with relevant examples and conclusions.
Parents
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dictating what their ward will do when they are free will make a child lose a sense of belonging among his or her age group.
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, when they are at school during
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they have to mingle with each other, if one of the students
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let's demonstrate car racing and the
mums
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pet
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what
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car racing others will laugh and he or she tends to feel embarrassed preventing her from joining them next
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loosing
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sense of belonging.
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children
that
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do things on their own
time
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picking any kind of activities,
they
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apply
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are known to be dependent.
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while
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in school flow with people of their age easily without fear of what could happen. Conclusively,
parents
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should allow their
pupil
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pupils
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to do whatever activities they feel like doing in their own
time
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, not all wards leisure
time
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should be planned by
parents
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words litres, milk, year, parents, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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