You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Manager, Myself, Dhinushika, working as a Credit Analyst at Amba Research for the past three years.

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, I have been maintaining a savings account with your bank for the past year and as I got my promotion four months back I applied for a credit card in February. I received my credit card statement for the month of March and I noticed some expensive

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that have been listed in the statement. Kindly note, that these

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have been made in a showroom in Melbourne.

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, I have proof to show that I was in Sydney and did not make any of these

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, I would like to make a request to block my card temporarily.

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, I would like to arrange a meeting with you and the respective executives who can help me fix

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issue. We can go through the proof documents that I have at my end and try to identify who has made these

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards, Dhinushika.

dhinushika_mMon May 01 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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