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The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graphs elucidate solutions for houses in flooding-affected areas under different situations.
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, different methods are applied based on whether a
stopbank
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 is located on the riverside or not. No matter what, houses in flooding areas are expected to raise their floor
level
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 above the ground to prevent potential hazards. The region with a
stopbank
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, which consists of three parts including the berm facing
to
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the river and the floodgate close to the inner land,
along with
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 it, the
stopbank
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 which is above the maximum flood
level
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 within 100
year
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. It could deter river water from fluxing in,
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, the rainwater from the other side of higher land will cause internal pounding.
On the other hand
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, when there is no
stopbank
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, buildings in
such
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 areas are expected to directly encounter the influence of flooding. In both suggestions, the floor
level
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 of those houses should be 300 mm above the flooding or pounding
level
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.
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