The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps display an industrial field in the
town
of Norbiyon and the future plan for the site's development.
Overall
, the future plan has some changes in the Norbiton
area
. There are Some amenities
such
as shops, a medical centre, a school, and a playground are constructed, and all the factories replaced by apartments. The farmland
area
become smaller than before. Some roads are built to connect the facilities around. Norbiyon Industrial has a big land with eight factories centred in the middle and east sides. The
town
has a river on the north, crossing along the
town
and manufacturing land. Still, in the north, there is huge farmland. The
area
of Norbiyon has a main
road
in the south and some roads connected to all the factories in the middle. The
town
is located on the west
side
. The planned future development there are some new constructions, All the factory is demolished and becomes facilities for citizens. The main
road
in the south has a conjunction. In the
center
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centre
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, there is a rounded
road
connected to some amenities. Some residences are built on the north, east, and west sides. The facilities
such
as shops are constructed in the western
area
and the medical centre is in the east. The playground builds close to houses on the north
side
. The school is on the east
side
near some apartments. The farmland is reduced and centred on the east
side
. The
road
is constructed across the river to attach a house building.
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