The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.
The following chart illustrates the export earnings in various
categories
in a particular country between 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table depicts how the proportion of Use synonyms
exports
changed in each Use synonyms
category
in 2016 compared with 2015.
During 2015 and 2016, there was a Use synonyms
slightly
increase in the value of different Change the adverb
slight
categories
of Use synonyms
exports
. At the same time, the proportion in each Use synonyms
category
didn’t change significantly, With the largest percentage Use synonyms
was
up to almost 15% and the lowest was about 0.8% Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
.
Petroleum Change the spelling
per cent
products
and Engineered goods still took the dominant position in both years but demonstrated a little difference in 2015. Use synonyms
With
Change preposition
The
the
petroleum Correct article usage
apply
products
was exceeds 5 Use synonyms
billions
dollars than Engineered goods. Eventually, those two Change to singular
billion
categories
of Use synonyms
exports
changed to Use synonyms
the
similar level in 2016. Gems and jewellery showed a Correct article usage
a
decrease
trend which was abo slightly compared with 2015 Change the verb form
decreasing
in
the year Change preposition
apply
of
2016 Change preposition
apply
while
the Agricultural Linking Words
products
had an extra Use synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
billion
billions
Add the preposition
ofbillions
eamings
than the Correct your spelling
earnings
last
year in 2016. The most outlier figure was the Linking Words
category
of textiles as the earning increased Use synonyms
for
about Change preposition
by
a
half Correct article usage
apply
than
that Change preposition
apply
of
in 2015.
Concerning Change preposition
apply
for
the changes in each Change preposition
apply
Category
of Use synonyms
exports
in 2016, as textiles value rose, the upward trajectory was the most outstanding compared with the other Use synonyms
categories
. The Second Use synonyms
categories
in increasing trend were engineered goods, petroleum Use synonyms
products
and agricultural Use synonyms
products
within 10 Use synonyms
percent
for about 8.5%, 3% and 0.81% relatively. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the Linking Words
Category
of Agricultural Use synonyms
Products
in Use synonyms
exports
demonstrated a Use synonyms
conversely
decrease Linking Words
in
5.18% which was worth to be mentioned in 2016 compared with 2015.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words categories, exports, category, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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