The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts given elucidate the
percentage
of
water
used for different
aimed
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in six areas of the world.
Overall
, it can be seen that
south
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America
has the largest of
water
domestic
used
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with 19%
while
central
Asia
and
Europe
also
have the largest
of
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agricultural
use
and industrial
use
with 88% and 53% respectively. To start with,
America
and
Europe
have a
slightly
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difference
of
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using
water
in
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domestic
use
which
above
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of
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10%,
whereas
Africa
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, central and
south east
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asia
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they are below
of
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10%.
Moreover
,
Africa
and central and
south east
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Asia
are superior in terms of using
water
in
agricultural
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that have an average
over
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80%
in contrast
to
Europe
and
south
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America
that
they
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are under
of
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40% except
south
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South
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America
which
almost
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identical
with
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the
percentage
of
Africa
, central and south east
Asia
. Turning to industrial
use
, we see
Europe
and North
America
have roughly similar
percentage
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percentages
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of between 48% and 53% which
higher-lever
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in
industry
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part.
However
, South
America
,
Africa
and
Asia
have much lower
percentage
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under 12%
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, america, asia, europe, use, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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