The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts given elucidate the
percentage
of water
used for different aimed
in six areas of the world. Replace the word
aims
Overall
, it can be seen that south
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South
America
has the largest of water
domestic used
with 19% Replace the word
use
while
central Asia
and Europe
also
have the largest of
agricultural Change preposition
apply
use
and industrial use
with 88% and 53% respectively.
To start with, America
and Europe
have a slightly
difference Change the adverb
slight
of
using Change preposition
in
water
in
domestic Change preposition
for
use
which above
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is above
of
10%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
Africa
, central and Change preposition
in Africa
south east
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south-east
asia
they are below Change the capitalization
Asia
of
10%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, Africa
and central and south east
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southeast
Asia
are superior in terms of using water
in agricultural
that have an average Replace the word
agriculture
over
80% Change preposition
of over
in contrast
to Europe
and south
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South
America
that they
are under Correct pronoun usage
which
of
40% except Change preposition
apply
south
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South
America
which almost
identical Add a missing verb
is almost
with
the Change preposition
to
percentage
of Africa
, central and south east Asia
.
Turning to industrial use
, we see Europe
and North America
have roughly similar percentage
of between 48% and 53% which Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
higher-lever
in Add a missing verb
is higher-lever
industry
part. Correct article usage
the industry
However
, South America
, Africa
and Asia
have much lower percentage
under 12%Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
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