ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc

In today's fast pacing world adolescents are given

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amount of exemption for doing whatever they want ,

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youngsters give preferences to violence in

games

to feel cool ,

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the reason for the violence in

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society.I opine that

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should set the barrier to avoid

such

games

.Let us discuss these arguments followed by my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin

with , Children nowadays are very much into playing

games

online

instead

of playing them physically.To illustrate , there was an article published by 'The Tribune' ,

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that

juvenile

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in today's world

are

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more fond of

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PlayStations

and that's not aiding them in any case. To put some forth light people are somewhere or the other are drowning their mental health by giving weightage to aggressive

games

.

Furthermore

,

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such

rowdy

games

may lead to harm the society in multifarious ways.

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, There was a game named 'Blue Whale',

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destroyed

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amount of adolescent's

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and

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of them led to take their lives because of

this

game .

Additionally

, Young

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the fact that these

games

are playing with their mind and damaging

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their

mental health. In my opinion,The making of these

games

should be banned or there should be proper

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mentioned before playing these

sort

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of

games

.To clarify,there was a survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Office (New Delhi) which stated that 100 out of 200 children are playing these

games

as they are provided online without any proper

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.I believe that

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these

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of sports should maintain some age guidelines before serving them publically. To encapsulate, Parents of

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adolescents should keep a check on their younger

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, as they need them to develop

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a

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good human

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.To relish their time tomorrow one should have a good history.