the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The given charts reveal the percentage of British
admission
to an England university that can use languages other than English. these charts show a trivial difference between students
at the beginning and the end of a decade.
To start with, the picture uncovers that in 2000, 20 per cent of admission
only can use English while
in 2020, the number of students
decreased to 10 per cent. Furthermore
, in 2000, the admission
who can only speak French is higher than admission
in 2010. Instead
, the number of admission
that are able to speak only German is the same as the other Change to a plural noun
admissions
students
in 2010. On the contrary
, the percentage of other items( namely: Spanish, another language, and two other language speakers) increased slightly. It is about 5 per cent.
In general, these two charts represent the fluctuation in the percentage of students
who can use different languages. In two groups of students
, there is a reduction. In the other three groups, there is induction and the last
group stay fixed.Submitted by ebrahimisara1369 on
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