There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: -describe the problems, -explain how these problems are affecting you and others, -suggest what could be done about it

Dear Sir\Madam, I am writing to
complaint
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that public
transport
that I use
everyday
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every
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that
it
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has
been
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several issues. First of all, it often breaks down in working and
it`s
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conditions are not valid.
Therefore
, a lot of troubles are coming out in use.
In addition
, passengers are always crowded
due to
the lack of traffic. These are causing many problems that in
use
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the use
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public
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of public
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transport
these days. Because I work at school. I am not arriving
to
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at
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school
due to
these problems.
In addition
, many people suffer from these troubles that they get attached to the public
transport
service. I have got many solutions for resolving these difficulties.
Firstly
, you should buy new
transport
. It can cause that wayfarers will not suffer anymore.
Secondly
, you should take care mechanical condition of your
transports
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. If you do not attend
that
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to that
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difficulty, a lot of troubles will come out which is
a
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apply
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bigger
that
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than
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now.
Therefore
, you should fix
a
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apply
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broken down-vehicles. I hope you will solve all of
problems
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the problems
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and aware me. If you resolve issues, I will
so
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be so
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glad.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Samandar Abdusattarov
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