There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: -describe the problems, -explain how these problems are affecting you and others, -suggest what could be done about it

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Dear Sir\Madam, I am writing to

complaint

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that public

transport

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that I use

everyday

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every

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that

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apply

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has

been

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several issues. First of all, it often breaks down in working and

it`s

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conditions are not valid.

Therefore

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, a lot of troubles are coming out in use.

In addition

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, passengers are always crowded

due to

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the lack of traffic. These are causing many problems that in

use

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the use

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public

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of public

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transport

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these days. Because I work at school. I am not arriving

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school

due to

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these problems.

In addition

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, many people suffer from these troubles that they get attached to the public

transport

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service. I have got many solutions for resolving these difficulties.

Firstly

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, you should buy new

transport

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. It can cause that wayfarers will not suffer anymore.

Secondly

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, you should take care mechanical condition of your

transports

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transport

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. If you do not attend

that

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to that

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difficulty, a lot of troubles will come out which is

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apply

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bigger

that

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than

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now.

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, you should fix

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apply

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broken down-vehicles. I hope you will solve all of

problems

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the problems

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and aware me. If you resolve issues, I will

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glad.

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Yours

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Your

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faithfully, Samandar Abdusattarov

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task response

Ensure to address all required points in the given task including clear description of problems, explanation of effects, and reasonable suggestions for resolution.

greeting and closing

Use more appropriate and formal greeting and closing in line with the formal nature of the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the content by using clear paragraphing and linking words to improve coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Expand your range of vocabulary and use more suitable expressions in order to demonstrate a higher level of word choice.

grammatical range

Work on improving grammatical accuracy, sentence structure, and expression variety to achieve a higher score in grammatical range.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some people believe that written communication is much less powerful than face to face interaction when it comes to conveying a message. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.