There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: -describe the problems, -explain how these problems are affecting you and others, -suggest what could be done about it
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing to
complaint
that public Replace the word
complain
transport
that I use everyday
that Correct your spelling
every
it
has Correct pronoun usage
apply
been
several issues.
First of all, it often breaks down in working and Verb problem
had
it`s
conditions are not valid. Replace the word
its
Therefore
, a lot of troubles are coming out in use. In addition
, passengers are always crowded due to
the lack of traffic. These are causing many problems that in use
Correct article usage
the use
public
Change preposition
of public
transport
these days. Because I work at school. I am not arriving to
school Change preposition
at
due to
these problems. In addition
, many people suffer from these troubles that they get attached to the public transport
service.
I have got many solutions for resolving these difficulties. Firstly
, you should buy new transport
. It can cause that wayfarers will not suffer anymore. Secondly
, you should take care mechanical condition of your transports
. If you do not attend Fix the agreement mistake
transport
that
difficulty, a lot of troubles will come out which is Change preposition
to that
a
bigger Change the article
apply
that
now. Correct word choice
than
Therefore
, you should fix a
broken down-vehicles.
I hope you will solve all of Correct article usage
apply
problems
and aware me. If you resolve issues, I will Add an article
the problems
so
glad.
Add a missing verb
be so
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Samandar AbdusattarovCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite