Your friend is coming over to stay with you. However, you will be away on vacation for a month. Write him/her a letter and say: – How to get the keys to your flat – How to operate the equipment in the flat, and – Suggest a few places of interest to visit

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Dear Rajat, I hope you are doing well. I am sorry to inform you that next week I am going to Toronto for my vacation. If I would know ahead of time before I might plan my vacation later. So, sorry I will not meet you when you will come.

Firstly

, I want you to know that you can find my flat keys in the locker on my building

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box you will see three keys, two of them are my flat keys and one for my postbox.

Secondly

, in my ,flat there is a number of things that are electronic and which are new to you. So, I want to you be familiar with them. I have electronic gas when you will use it please turn on the vent for safety purposes.

Also

, I have an automatic washer and dryer so please after every use keep the dryer box empty because it may not work properly if you would not clean it.

Also

, in my home ,town there is a number of places to visit in your free time. I would like to suggest you to go Calgary Tower, Lake Louise and Bow River. I hope I will meet you next time soon. Your Friend, Jyoti

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

219 words

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The Closing

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With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

STUDENTS SHOULD PAY THE FULL COST OF THEIR OWN STUDY, BECAUSE UNIVERSITY EDUCATION BENEFITS INDIVIDUALS RATHER THAN SOCIETY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?