Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
In every business, employers play a big role in executing business-related tasks. But in Some cases, the employer’s will is to keep in contact with their staff every age, whether during office timings or off hours as well. In
this
essay, we are going to discuss how this
activity does not have more advantages but has many disadvantages.
As every organisation/business is operated by intra-connection in an organisation. Every activity needs to be reported and observed and then
action is taken by the responsible authorises. This
act can keep everyone up to date and aware of every situation. For example
, A person in the banking sector, is responsible for maintaining
the lockers secure and he has to report every circumstance to his supervisor, Verb problem
keeping
this
conversation will aid his supervisor to stay updated all the moment. For instance
, if someday, he is on vacation or on holiday, he may be contacted to inquire about any incident for a specific day, which will be very useful to solve problems.
On the other hand
, Some of the cases are unbearable and related to contact with the department. They need to stay active and responsive at every pace as it is supposed that they can be contacted at any age even late at night and on holidays as well. This
activity ruins the personal lives of personnel. They can not enjoy their moment with their family freely because their employer keeps disturbing them by calling at every point due to
which the personal life of all staff is affected very badly. According to
a survey report, it was found that institutes don't perform well if they are pressurised
to keep in contact every moment.
In conclusion, the connection is key to operating a business successfully. Verb problem
pressured
However
, this
practice has more disadvantages than advantages because this
is ruining a personnel's family life.Submitted by uzzam_khan110 on
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task response
The essay addresses the prompt but could more clearly express the advantages and disadvantages of employers contacting staff at all times.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are adequate but could be more clearly connected to the main body of the essay.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...