The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts show the
percentage
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of employees from different age ranges who work in the public segment in the UK in the years 2015 and 2020.
Overall
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, about half of the employees were at the ages 21-30 and over 50 in the first
year
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. And
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, most of the
workers
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in the second
year
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were from the age of 21-33. The
percentage
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of employees under 21 and over 50 was reduced in
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period. In 2015, the less proportion of
employment
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belonged to the ages under 21 and 41-50 with 14% and 19% respectively. And most of the
employment
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with equal
percentage
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were 21-30 and over 50 with 23%. People aged 31-40 composed 21% of the whole
workers
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in
this
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year
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. In 2020, the
percentage
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of young people under 21 and adults over 50 reduced by 2% and 7% respectively.
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, people from the age of 31-40 witnessed a decrease in
this
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period by 10%.
Workers
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in their 20s increased and reached the peak of 33% of
employment
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.
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, the
percentage
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of
workers
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who were in
the
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40s increased and composed 28% of the total
employment
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in
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this
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year
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, year, workers, employment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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