Women play quite different role in society than twenty years ago. They make career growth, earn money, drive cars and spend less time with their children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, in many societies

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have more rights than twenty years ago. Now, there are some changes in gender roles,

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as females

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freedom

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to earn money, create a startup, make career

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and

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take care

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their kids. In

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essay, there are some benefits, which

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otweight

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weight

than drawbacks. First of all, the main advantages are

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have access to live their own

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best

lifes

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. The reason why is happen, It is a human right to choose and do everything.

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, it is

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gender equality.

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,

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can be

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,

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leader

or even

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president of

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State

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of America, these

proffesions

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professions

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only

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specialities, less than 20 years ago.

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the

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result,

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started to be

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stronger

than

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generation.

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, some individuals strongly believe that

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this

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situation

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drawbacks.

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, most

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have

family

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families

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and children,

espeacilly

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especially

babies, which need mom care, love and kind. After, particular girls prefer to be

childfree

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, which means no babies at all. So, statistic researchers write that

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it is a negative thing, because, it is affect

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demography and

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the country

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country

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economy too.

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the

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result, these

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in most cases have a

lot

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men

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energy, which

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effect

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to

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society. On top of that, the population suppose

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should spend time with their children and husbands. More often than not,

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, there

are

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extra social pressure

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women

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, who work, study or make a career.

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conclusion, without any

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, nowadays, females have more freedom than 20-30 years ago. It is

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ordinary development for human civilization, which

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advantages and drawbacks.