The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages In addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university 

in England who were able to speak other languages In addition to English, in

 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts given
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the proportion of British students at the same university who were able to speak other languages than English in the years 2000 and 2010.
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Spanish only was the largest percentage in both years and showed increasing from
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year. First of all, Spanish only became the most common
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to speak among British students in one university. Meanwhile, German only was the lowest percentage at 10% in 2000 and French spoken had the same percentage as German only which French and German were the least spoken
language
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only in 2010.
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, the pupils who did not learn
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language
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lessened to 10% from 20% in 2010,
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to students who spoke another
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at 15% and two other languages at 10% which depicted
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% equal
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which turned out to be 20% and 15% respectively in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • multilingualism
  • globalisation
  • immigration
  • education policy
  • career prospects
  • cultural understanding
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • increased/decreased
  • significant
  • trends
  • shifts
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