The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages In addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts given
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the proportion of British students at the same university who were able to speak other languages than English in the years 2000 and 2010. Correct subject-verb agreement
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Overall
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Spanish only was the largest percentage in both years and showed increasing from Change preposition
in
previous
year.
First of all, Spanish only became the most common Add an article
the previous
language
to speak among British students in one university. Meanwhile, German only was the lowest percentage at 10% in 2000 and French spoken had the same percentage as German only which French and German were the least spoken Use synonyms
language
only in 2010.
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On the other hand
, the pupils who did not learn Linking Words
other
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another
language
lessened to 10% from 20% in 2010, Use synonyms
in contrast
to students who spoke another Linking Words
language
at 15% and two other languages at 10% which depictedUse synonyms
5
% equal Correct article usage
a 5
increasing
which turned out to be 20% and 15% respectively in 2010.Replace the word
increase
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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