You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram portrays how a solar panel is structured and used .
Overall
, it can be noticed that energy is generated through sunlight with the use of both water and
air
, both sources undergoing 3 steps and having the same transparent top box with some slight changes in working mechanism and structure .
To begin
with , solar panels
to
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apply
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air
heat
starts
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start
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when cool
air
enters through the inlet where it's
then
in contact with sun rays passing via the transparent top and into the box , it ends when the
air
is now heated and is passed out from the outlet .
On the other hand
, heated water solar panels work almost identically , the major difference is
instead
of
air
coming in and out of the inlets and
outputs
Wrong verb form
outputting
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its water and it
also
needs a pipe to connect both sides
unlike
Add the comma(s)
,unlike
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air
which moves freely in the box .
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • solar panels
  • structure
  • components
  • function
  • diagrams
  • photovoltaic cells
  • electricity
  • sunlight
  • conduction
  • convection
  • radiation
  • comparison
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