You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram portrays how a solar panel is structured and used .
Overall
, it can be noticed that energy is generated through sunlight with the use of both water and Linking Words
air
, both sources undergoing 3 steps and having the same transparent top box with some slight changes in working mechanism and structure .
Use synonyms
To begin
with , solar panels Linking Words
to
Change preposition
apply
air
heat Use synonyms
starts
when cool Change the verb form
start
air
enters through the inlet where it's Use synonyms
then
in contact with sun rays passing via the transparent top and into the box , it ends when the Linking Words
air
is now heated and is passed out from the outlet .
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, heated water solar panels work almost identically , the major difference is Linking Words
instead
of Linking Words
air
coming in and out of the inlets and Use synonyms
outputs
its water and it Wrong verb form
outputting
also
needs a pipe to connect both sides Linking Words
unlike
Add the comma(s)
,unlike
air
which moves freely in the box .Use synonyms
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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