The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the steps to produce
cement
by using equipment and how Use synonyms
cement
is used in the process of making concrete for the purposes of building.
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Overall
, the stages of making adhesive consist of five steps and start with putting the necessary ingredients into the crusher to create a mixed powder. Linking Words
Moreover
, there are four main factors to successfully produce concrete.
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Firstly
, we need to have a combination of limestone and clay to put into the crusher. Linking Words
As a result
, the powder which was produced in the previous step will be transferred into the mixer and Linking Words
then
the rotating heater using heat from outside. Linking Words
In addition
, a liquid mixture will eventually come out and be put into the grinder to Linking Words
finally
get the product of Linking Words
cement
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Next,
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cement
will be put into a container like a cloth or paper bag for use.
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However
, for building purposes, concrete is Linking Words
also
needed to be produced. The process of making it includes a concrete mixer and ingredients Linking Words
such
as 15% of Linking Words
cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel.Use synonyms
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