The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand
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The pie graphs illustrate the
sources
which generated electricity
in New Zealand
and Germany
in two years, 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that there were more units
of electricity
used in both countries in 2010 than in 1980. In addition
, nuclear power became the main fuel source in Germany
, while
coal was the predominant one in New Zealand
.
New Zealand
saw a significant increase in the units
of electricity
used from 127 units
in 1980 to 200 units
in 2010. Similarly
, the figure for Germany
also
rose remarkably from 107 units
in 1980 to 214 units
in 2010.
In 1980, the proportion of electricity
generation
in New Zealand
accounted for 56 units
, which was the highest in the total units
of sources
of electricity
. While
electricity
sources
manufactured by hydro and natural gas took up the same units
, with 30 and the figure for petroleum was 11 units
. Regarding Germany
, the proportions of electricity
sources
were 28 units
by coal and natural gas, about 20 units
by petroleum and nuclear, and 7 units
by hydro.
In 2010, there were rapid changes in the sources
of electricity
generation
in both countries. The figure for coal made up to 150 units
in the total of 200 units
of sources
of electricity
, 50 units
left were in the sources
of coal, petroleum, and natural gas. While
155 units
were in electricity
generation
by nuclear in Germany
, which constituted the most of the total sources
of electricity
generation
in 2010.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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