The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand

The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and

Germany in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand
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The pie graphs illustrate the
sources
which generated
electricity
in New
Zealand
and
Germany
in two years, 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that there were more
units
of
electricity
used in both countries in 2010 than in 1980.
In addition
, nuclear power became the main fuel source in
Germany
,
while
coal was the predominant one in New
Zealand
. New
Zealand
saw a significant increase in the
units
of
electricity
used from 127
units
in 1980 to 200
units
in 2010.
Similarly
, the figure for
Germany
also
rose remarkably from 107
units
in 1980 to 214
units
in 2010. In 1980, the proportion of
electricity
generation
in New
Zealand
accounted for 56
units
, which was the highest in the total
units
of
sources
of
electricity
.
While
electricity
sources
manufactured by hydro and natural gas took up the same
units
, with 30 and the figure for petroleum was 11
units
. Regarding
Germany
, the proportions of
electricity
sources
were 28
units
by coal and natural gas, about 20
units
by petroleum and nuclear, and 7
units
by hydro. In 2010, there were rapid changes in the
sources
of
electricity
generation
in both countries. The figure for coal made up to 150
units
in the total of 200
units
of
sources
of
electricity
, 50
units
left were in the
sources
of coal, petroleum, and natural gas.
While
155
units
were in
electricity
generation
by nuclear in
Germany
, which constituted the most of the total
sources
of
electricity
generation
in 2010.
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