The graph shows the contribution of UK economy . Summarise the information.
The bar chart illustrates the participation of certain occupation fields in the U.K. economy within a period of 100 years, from 1900 to 2000. Those sectors are distributed to agriculture , manufacturing and business and finance.
Firstly
, looking from an overall
perspective , it is readily apparent that in the first half of the ,
20thcentury the economy was based on agriculture and manufacturing Remove the comma
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while
from 1975 business and finance rose rapidly to become the main contributor.
When it comes to agriculture , its contribution declined dramatically from around 50% from 1900 to 1950 to less than 10 % in 2000. On the contrary
business and finance displayed huge growth from around 5%in 1900 to more than 30% in 2000. Last
but not least the contribution of manufacturing gradually decreased from around 45% at the begging of the century to less than 20 % in the 2000s .Submitted by mariamelina2002 on
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