The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph compares
men
’s and women
’s leisure
time
based on five different employment statuses from 1998 to 1999. It is clear that
men
have more free time
than women
do except for part-timers and housewives
.
When it comes to sex, males spend more leisure
time
compared to females. With regard to full-time
,unemployed workers
, and retired people, the amount of males’ leisure
time
is about ten hours more than that of females. On the other hand
, part-time
workers
and housewives
consist of only women
.
As the height of each bar shows, unemployed and retired people have the most leisure
time
among all of the five occupations. the amount of free time
for the two kinds of workers
has about eighty and seventy for men
and women
respectively. Similarly
,full-time
men
and women
workers
have around fifty and forty leisure
hours. Unlikely, part-time
workers
and housewives
jobs are done by only women
with around forty leisure
time
.
To sum up
, although
part-time
and housewives
are done by only women
, men
tend to have more leisure
time
than women
do no matter what employment status they are in.Submitted by ka.ki.ku.ke.kohei0827 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, men, women, housewives, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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