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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graph compares
men
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’s and
women
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’s
leisure
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time
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 based on five different employment statuses from 1998 to 1999.
It is clear that
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men
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 have more free
time
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 than
women
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 do except for part-timers and
housewives
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. When it comes to sex, males spend more
leisure
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time
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 compared to females. With regard to full-
time
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,unemployed
workers
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, and retired people, the amount of males’
leisure
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time
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 is about ten hours more than that of females.
On the other hand
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, part-
time
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workers
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 and
housewives
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 consist of only
women
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. As the height of each bar shows, unemployed and retired people have the most
leisure
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time
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 among all of the five occupations. the amount of free
time
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 for the two kinds of
workers
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 has about eighty and seventy for
men
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 and
women
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 respectively.
Similarly
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,full-
time
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men
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 and
women
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workers
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 have around fifty and forty
leisure
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 hours. Unlikely, part-
time
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workers
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 and
housewives
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 jobs are done by only
women
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 with around forty
leisure
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time
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.
To sum up
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,
although
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 part-
time
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 and
housewives
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 are done by only
women
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,
men
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 tend to have more
leisure
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time
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 than
women
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 do no matter what employment status they are in.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, men, women, housewives, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • employment status
  • full-time
  • part-time
  • unemployed
  • retired
  • disparity
  • illustrates
  • depicts
  • comparison
  • significant
  • notable
  • approximately
  • contrast
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • data
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