Some people feel manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some

school

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of

thoughts

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thought

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opined that

producers

and sellers are responsible to lower the costs of packaged

goods

,

while

others think that consumers should limit the purchase of

products

with excessive packaging. In my opinion,

reduction

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a reduction

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in the

cost

of packaged

goods

will lead to

increase

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an increase

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in demand and growth of the

production

company

while

avoidance of patronage by

customers

will lead to reduced

cost

of purchasing

goods

and improved health or lifestyle choices On the one hand, if

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and retailers bring down the

cost

of buying

products

, there will be an

increase

in

customers

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customers'

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demand

for

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the particular product

as a result

there will be an

increase

in the profit generated by

producers

and retailers. Canned tuna fish

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an example, the stress involved in personal processing of it led to an

increase

in

purchase

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the purchase

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of processed

one

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ones

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but if the

cost

price is raised, people will be forced to individual processing which will be cheaper and will enable consumers to save money, improved taste thereby cutting down the demand of the product.

On the other hand

, when the

producers

of

goods

lower the sales price, it will make them the limelight of

production

that is

, their

products

will be known by everyone and

thus

improving the image of

production

.

For instance

, a seasoning known as indomie has taken over the noodles

production

companies as most people now request

for

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their

products

and making other instant noodles companies not relevant. But if consumers reduce their consumption of processed food, there will be an improvement in their health status as they'll consume

less

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fewer

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preservatives which

some

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are known to be carcinogens, thereby reducing their chances of having cancer and other

food causing

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food-causing

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diseases . In conclusion, it is of

paramount

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need for

producers

and marketing firms to reduce the amount of packaged

goods

in other to enable their

customers

to be able to afford the

cost

price and

increase

their supply rather than for

customers

to avoid the purchase by saving money and seeing the health impacts of reducing the consumption of packaged foods