Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss the both views and give your opinion

Task 2 Many have argued that it is the duty of the producers and the sellers in the big shops to bring down the price of package commodities.

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some are of the opinion that

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end users

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should quit

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purchasing wares that

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many packaging.

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essay will be analysing

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both arguments and may opinion defined in the

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, decreasing the rate at which the companies that

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goods

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and markets beautify their items will go a long way to cut down the

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of the

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.

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, my neighbour that works

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beverages

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industry told me that they spend billions of naira to design the company printouts that are used to paste on their products. Having spent

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such

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money means that the price of that particular

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goods

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must eventually go up in other for the company to make

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.

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, people that work in that section would like to add their individual profits ,

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high

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the high

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cost

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of items in

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the market

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.

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, when the individuals that will make use of the

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stop buying from companies that

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a lot of decoration, they may end up buying a fake product.

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is because

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it is only by reading the labels of

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that one can clear his or her doubt.

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, folks that have some ailments have been strictly warned by their doctors on the kinds of food they need to avoid,

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, glancing through write-ups on the

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is essential. In my opinion, I suggest that items in the market should not be elaborated packaged to the extent of attaching

on

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the company capital to avoid

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cost

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. Despite the massive labelling of

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, individuals need it to ascertain the type of

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product they are buying.

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, firms and distributors need to decrease their packaging style in other to save

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cost

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.

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,

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must read the contents of the

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they want to procure. I am of

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opinions

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that despite the packaging of

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high , consumers still need it to avoid substandard products.