The flow chart depicts the figure of tourists to a monumental center in UK during the two seasons of the year in 2003.

Overall

, the museum saw a large influx of visitors during the summer than

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winter period all through the hours of the day. It is represented in time.

To begin

with, at

ninth

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hour, about 200 people visited the historian site during the cold compared to 400 visitors in the

warmth

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period.

Likewise

, at 10 am, the number of tourists during the chill rise to about 450

while

the heat period at the same hour was 1,300.

Furthermore

, by 11:am, the figure peaked

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500 during the winter

while

summer

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was 1,400; the number (500) was maintained at 12pm but the sunshine climate peaked

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1600 (the highest figure of the chart). In continuance, at 13th hour, there

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decline

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in both temperance at 400 and 1200 for wintertime and summertime respectively. The

redundance

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was continued at 2pm at 150 and 1000 for both

climate

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. From 3pm to 6pm, no

guest

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guests

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visit the museum during the cold

while

sunshine saw 900 tourists at 3pm, 500 at 4pm, 400 at 5pm and no

visitor

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at 6pm.