You have returned from your vacation staying at a bed and breakfast. When you checked your bank account, you realised you have been charged twice for the deposit. Write a letter to the bed and breakfast host. In your letter: Thank the host for your stay Explain the double deposit charge situation Ask the host for a refund

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to the double transaction issue for the deposit. First and foremost, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for the service during my stay. The staff was polite and

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to help, which made my vacation ideal. I will definitely recommend

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hotel to all my friends.

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, during my trip back home, I noticed an issue with

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payment. It seems that I have been charged twice by mistake. I remember there was a computer error during my check-in, which could have caused the second charge. Not only is

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situation quite awkward, but it

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introduces significant inconvenience for me, as I had some plans for these funds. I would like to receive a refund as soon as possible. You can send money using the wire details I provided prior to check-in at the reception.Thank you for your help. Yours faithfully, Vadim Ahmerov

vaahmerovSat May 13 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

157 words

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