You have returned from your vacation staying at a bed and breakfast. When you checked your bank account, you realised you have been charged twice for the deposit. Write a letter to the bed and breakfast host. In your letter: Thank the host for your stay Explain the double deposit charge situation Ask the host for a refund

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the double charge for the deposit. First of all, I would like to thank you for the high-quality service during my stay, which brightened up my holiday. The breakfast was delicious every morning and the room service was just perfect;

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, I will definitely choose your hotel next time and recommend it to my friends and colleagues.

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, there was an unpleasant issue related to the double deposit charge. I paid an advance through an online booking service with one credit card, but at

check-in

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I used another one. Unexpectedly, the deposit has been charged from both bank accounts. Never have I been in a

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situation, so I am not sure about

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steps. But I suppose it would be fair that you refund me. Could you make a refund on a card that I used during check-in? Yours faithfully,

Aliia

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Alicia

Umergalina

vaahmerovSat May 13 2023

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task response

Ensure to clearly express the purpose of the letter, which is to request a refund for the double deposit charge.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite. Well done.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a consistent flow of ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance coherence and cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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