The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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The given pie charts illustrate the portions of British students who could be able to speak other foreign languages apart from English at one university in England, over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2010.

Overall

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, it can be seen that Spanish was the head

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in both mentioned years

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other accents have similar percentages in comparison with Spanish. Looking at the details, Spanish was the most spoken dialect with 35% and 30% in 2010 and 2000 in turn and

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, another

language

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category was ranked second with 20% and 15% respectively.

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this

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, not speaking another

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was the third accent with 20% in 2000 and 10% in 2010.

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, only 15% of students spoke French in 2000

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this

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amount experienced a five per cent low in 2010.

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, the remaining dialects;German and other languages have exactly the same ratios with 10% in 2010 and the percentages related to them in 2000 for German was one-tenth and the ratio of another

language

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saw a

five cent

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low in the same year.

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The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

All children should be given a free laptop when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree?

Machines and robots are increasingly replacing workers in a number of industries . Do the aadvantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

the number of arrests per year for using illegal drugs between 1991 to 2005.

Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.