The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The given pie charts illustrate the portions of British students who could be able to speak other foreign languages apart from English at one university in England, over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that Spanish was the head language
in both mentioned years while
other accents have similar percentages in comparison with Spanish.
Looking at the details, Spanish was the most spoken dialect with 35% and 30% in 2010 and 2000 in turn and then
, another language
category was ranked second with 20% and 15% respectively. Following
this
, not speaking another language
was the third accent with 20% in 2000 and 10% in 2010.
Additionally
, only 15% of students spoke French in 2000 while
this
amount experienced a five per cent low in 2010. Finally
, the remaining dialects;German and other languages have exactly the same ratios with 10% in 2010 and the percentages related to them in 2000 for German was one-tenth and the ratio of another language
saw a five cent
low in the same year.Add a hyphen
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